P5

Summary:

With the feedback that I was given for my script, I used it to improve my spelling corrections, and my grammar. I was able to change the how the Ouija board was shown in it. I also added more descriptions of the characters and how the are shown through out the story, creating more of a personality to them and more of a stereotypical horror personalities to them, showing that they are more vunerable to a horror situation.

I added more dares into the game before showing the demon arriving, creating more of a party atmosphere. This added more depth to the story and the characters, helping the audience gauge with them and get to understand their views and jokes. With the demon I wanted to make it more terryifing and add more drama around, making the characters more scared or upset with what’s happening, and adding some concequences to some of the questions or actions they took towards the demon. By doing this is made the demon more mysterious and created tension between the characters and the demon.